The diagram below represents a survey on whether consumers would actually consider buying cars from tech companies such as Apple & Google. Summarise the information given in the diagram. Write at least 150 words.

The diagram below represents a survey on whether consumers would actually consider buying cars from tech companies such as Apple & Google. Summarise the information given in the diagram. Write at least 150 words.
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The provided table illustrates the information about customers’ preferences for buying cars from technologically eminent companies
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as Apple and Google, in percentages by market and age groups.
Overall
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, what stands out from the given infographics is that the expected consumerism of the younger generation in high-tech cars is considerably more than in other categories.
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, market distribution among countries is slightly skewed to India, China and Brazil. Indian, Chinese and Brazilian car lower shares are significantly higher than others, accounting for 81, 74 and 63 per cent respectively.
Subsequently
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, 38% of France folks were willing to purchase the new cars,
while
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German and United States citizens were left behind with 32% and 29%
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turn.
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, the UK customers took the
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place, with the smallest numbers which represented 26 portion of shares.
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considering the age groups, it is notable that the buyers between 18 and 34 years old had slightly more shares than 35 and 49 years old ones, with a 16% difference.
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, 50 or more years old respondents accumulated only 26 per cent of the market.
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