The pie chart shows average monthly student expenditure in the UK in 2016. The bar chart shows sources of student income in the same year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two charts give information about UK
students
spending and where their money
comes from in 2016. Overall
we can see that students
spend nearly half of their money
on their rent and the most common source of income is from a student loan.
On average, students
spent around £800 a monthly
in 2016 and nearly half was spending on rent. Apart from spending on other things, the next highest section is food and Replace the word
month
students
spent £124 on this
on average. Spending on bills, travelling and socialising were all similar and students
spent £52-£69 on these things a month.
Regarding student income, 80% of students
in the UK receive a student loan. The next most common way of getting money
is through relatives and part time
employment with around 70% of Add a hyphen
part-time
students
receiving money
from them. Also
similar were
the Correct subject-verb agreement
was
numbers
of Fix the agreement mistake
number
students
receiving money
from savings and overdrafts at around 40%. The least common way of receiving money
is from grants and funding.Submitted by bhavifasai on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, money with synonyms.
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