The charts below show the changes in ownership of electric appliances and amount of time spend doing housework in household in one country between 1920 and 2019.
The upper chart clearly demonstrates the alternations in the percentage of households facilitated by electric appliances in a country from 1920 to 2019,
whereas
the second one illustrates how long each household pursued housework weekly throughout the same period. Linking Words
Overall
, it is evident that people gradually took up less housework as they owned more electrical appliances.
Looking at the years 1920 to 1960, an upward tendency is noticeable regarding buying washing machines, vacuum cleaners and refrigerators. The figures kept rising significantly until 1940 when they reached the same percentage of approximately 50. Meanwhile, the Linking Words
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people participate in manual work dwindled considerably from 50 Use synonyms
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, the three appliances surged even Linking Words
further
, with refrigerators being the absolute leader at 90% and vacuum cleaners and washing machines following with 70%. Linking Words
As a result
, the housework figure plummeted to only 20 Linking Words
hours
.
In terms of 1960 to 2016, the capture for refrigerators and vacuum cleaners saw a gradual rising trend and commenced at 100% in the Use synonyms
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year. In comparison, that of washing machines witnessed a slight surge to well below 70%. During the same timeline, households dedicated fewer Linking Words
hours
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finally
plunged to merely 10 Linking Words
hours
weekly in 2016, thanks to the great emergence of household gadgets.Use synonyms
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