The chart below shows numbers of incidents and injuries per 100 million passenger miles travelled (PMT) by transportation type in 2002.
The bar graph below illustrates
comparison
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a comparison
the
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of the
number
of Use synonyms
incidents
and Use synonyms
injuries
each 100 Use synonyms
million
travellers who commuted by different types of transportation in 2002.
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It is clear that
demand response saw the highest Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
incidents
and Use synonyms
injuries
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while
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,
that of commuter Remove the comma
apply
rail
was the lowest in 2002.
The figure for Use synonyms
incidents
in commuter Use synonyms
rail
was 20 per Use synonyms
million
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whereas
, that of demand response was higher at 225 per Linking Words
million
PMT. Use synonyms
In addition
, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
incidents
in light Use synonyms
rail
was equal to that of bus at 76 per Use synonyms
million
PMT. Use synonyms
Also
, in heavy Linking Words
rail
, the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
incidents
stood at 51 per Use synonyms
million
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while
that of Linking Words
injuries
was lower at 35.
The most statistical Use synonyms
injuries
belonged to demand response 173 per Use synonyms
million
. Use synonyms
However
, the figure for commuter Linking Words
rail
was lower at 17. The Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
injuries
for bus and light Use synonyms
rail
was 66 and 39 per Use synonyms
million
, respectively.Use synonyms
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