The maps show the harbor at different times, in 2000 and now.

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, new amenities have been added, and some features have been redeveloped or replaced by others. The main road, located in the western part of Porth Harbour, has remained unchanged. In 2000, only one car park had an entrance from the main road, but today, both car park entrances have been moved outside. The showers and toilets have remained in place,

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the areas for private yachts and fishing boats have been swapped. In the northern part, a dock has been added,

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the public beach still serves tourists. Directly opposite the new dock, a new cafe and shops have been built just beyond the lifeboat station.

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, there has been some redevelopment and construction in the southeast part. The road has been extended to reach the castle (formerly disused), which has been reconstructed and now serves as a hotel. The public beach that was located near the old castle has been transformed into a private beach for the hotel.

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has undergone significant redevelopment and construction.

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