(2024) You exercise regularly and have been a member of many different gyms. Recently, you moved into a new neighbourhood and joined a new gym. You have noticed that people at this gym do not bother to wipe down the machines after use and often leave dirty towels on the benches in the change rooms. Write to the gym manager. In your letter: explain who you are describe the problem exactly make suggestions to improve the gym

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to inform you about an unsatisfactory event at the

gym

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. I am now a member of the lounge

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located near the beach. As my occupation requires me to work from different locations, I am on constant move.

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, I tried several gyms in various places. So, you could say I have a diverse experience of gyms. Since I started working out at your

gym

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, I noticed the members of

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gym

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are pretty unhygienic.

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, when I was waiting for my turn at the barbell machine

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when the person before me finished his exercise, he did not sanitize the equipment.

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, there are used towels which I see all around in the

gym

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and changing rooms. If

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continues to happen, it could be dangerous to

health

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and safety of the members. I would suggest, if you could put a sign at the entrance, it can be helpful.

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gives a message to the members

how

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to clean the equipment and

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their towels. I hope you take

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into consideration as it can be a serious health and safety hazard. Yours

sincerley

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sincerely

, Jojo

yashlakum22Wed Apr 23 2025

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Consider providing a more detailed introduction about yourself and your experience with gyms to create a clearer context for your concerns.

coherence and cohesion

Ensure that each paragraph focuses on one main idea to improve clarity, especially in your second paragraph.

coherence and cohesion

Be mindful of minor spelling errors, such as 'sincerely.' Attention to detail can enhance the professionalism of your letter.

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You expressed a clear understanding of the issue and its potential risks for gym members.

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Your suggestion for improvement is practical and straightforward, showing consideration for the gym's management.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

202 words

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