The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The data given in the table illustrates the underground
railway
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system of six different
cities
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in different countries.
Overall
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, only one city opened the underground system very early and had the longest
railway
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route
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.
However
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, other
cities
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opened it very later and the number of passengers is bigger than it. Some
cities
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had
also
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a very short
route
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for the
railway
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.
London
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opened the
railway
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track
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very early in 1863
while
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two other
cities
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opened it after an interval of probably 27 years. The
route
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to
London
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was the longest
route
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,
that is
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394 kilometres but people in Tokyo travelled more every year. The length of the
track
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of Paris was approximately half of the length of
London
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’s
route
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and started after 150 years of
London
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. The
last
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track
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opened in 2001 in the city of America, Los Angeles, which was the second shortest
track
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and about 50 million people travelled every year. Washington DC started its rail line 100 years after
London
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, in 1976 and the number of passengers in it is almost 3 times of America’s other city Los Angeles.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words railway, cities, route, london, track with synonyms.
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