The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014

The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014
The line chart illustrates the
fluctuation
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prices per month of
copper
,
nickel
, and zink from
January
to December 2014. Units are measured in percentage (%).
Overall
, it can be seen that the change fee of
nickel
was the most rose and fell.
Also
, all metals' starting points were different,
while
they hit relatively the same proportion
at the end
of the year.
Copper
, zinc, and
nickel
had a similar trend that went down
first,
after
January
, and went up until July. The
copper
started at 2% in
January
and decreased to half of it in July. The zink was at 1% in
January
and became below 0% but above -1%.
In contrast
,
nickel
has the highest change cost, at 6%, in
January
. After that, the cost decreased gradually until April, at 1%.
Then
jumped dramatically to -1% in July.
On the other hand
, the three metals increased gradually from July to December.
copper
climbed up for almost twice its proportion.
Moreover
, zinc and
nickel
rose sharply from negative rates to
at
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2% and 1% respectively. In the final period, in December, zinc was the main material that had many changes, followed by
copper
and
nickel
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words copper, nickel, january with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "went down" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • average monthly change
  • prices of metals
  • trend
  • spike
  • fluctuation
  • increase
  • decrease
  • sharp rise
  • sharp fall
  • stability
  • volatility
  • data points
  • comparison
  • contrast
  • external factors
  • influences
  • market dynamics
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