The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014

The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014
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The line chart illustrates the
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prices per month of
copper
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,
nickel
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, and zink from
January
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to December 2014. Units are measured in percentage (%).
Overall
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, it can be seen that the change fee of
nickel
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was the most rose and fell.
Also
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, all metals' starting points were different,
while
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they hit relatively the same proportion
at the end
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of the year.
Copper
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, zinc, and
nickel
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had a similar trend that went down
first,
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after
January
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, and went up until July. The
copper
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started at 2% in
January
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and decreased to half of it in July. The zink was at 1% in
January
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and became below 0% but above -1%.
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,
nickel
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has the highest change cost, at 6%, in
January
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. After that, the cost decreased gradually until April, at 1%.
Then
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jumped dramatically to -1% in July.
On the other hand
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, the three metals increased gradually from July to December.
copper
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climbed up for almost twice its proportion.
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, zinc and
nickel
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rose sharply from negative rates to
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2% and 1% respectively. In the final period, in December, zinc was the main material that had many changes, followed by
copper
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and
nickel
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words copper, nickel, january with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "went down" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • average monthly change
  • prices of metals
  • trend
  • spike
  • fluctuation
  • increase
  • decrease
  • sharp rise
  • sharp fall
  • stability
  • volatility
  • data points
  • comparison
  • contrast
  • external factors
  • influences
  • market dynamics
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