The two maps show an island before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant?

The two maps show an island before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant?
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The two maps show an
island
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both before and after it was developed as a tourist destination.
Overall
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, most development took place on the western and central areas of the
island
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, where a small number of tourist amenities have been built,
while
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the eastern coast has been left in its natural state. Prior to development,
this
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relatively small
island
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was uninhabited. In terms of its natural features, there was a beach area on the west coast, and some vegetation, which was denser on the eastern part of the
island
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. As part of the development program,
this
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vegetation has largely been retained, with some building work fitting around existing trees. Following construction,
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the
island
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is now more developed, the style of the buildings is generally sympathetic to the natural environment, with relatively simple, single-story accommodation and only two larger, two-story buildings. The main structures are a central reception building and a restaurant just north of
this
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. Visitors can stay in hut-style accommodation, which is grouped on either side of the reception. In terms of access,
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tracks have been created for vehicles, these are limited to the main buildings.
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, there are footpaths linking the accommodation to the swimming beach and other facilities. Reaching the
island
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has been made easier with the addition of a pier on the south coast, which
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allows for sailing.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words island with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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