Task 2: cyclists and car drivers sharing the same road causes some problems. What are the problems and what can be done to reduce them?
Recent years have witnessed the share of
roads
used by both cyclists
and car motorists. This
may cause some dilemmas and this
essay will discuss these before suggesting viable solutions to remedy the situation.
Different transportation monitors sharing the same road can result in two primary problems. Foremost among these is limiting cars
’ speed. In spite of speed regulations performed on every pathway, automobile drivers
may have to lower their rate of movement when there are cycles in front of the cars
in order to avoid collisions. This
means people in cars
spend much more time on their journeys. In addition
, cyclists
suddenly turn to proceed with other transport such
as trucks, cars
or buses can lead to traffic accidents. That said, in a worse circumstance, the larger vehicle does not only hit bicyclists, but an immediate action operated by the driver also
affects other transports which follow behind.
So as to cope with the aforementioned problem, there are proper measures which should be considered and followed by both the government and individuals. The first solution could be that government sponsors for reconstructing roads
with separation in lanes according to
each type of transportation. If this
is the case, there will be fewer interruptions to car drivers
as they do not have to reduce their speed owing to cycle-blockers. Besides
that, bicycles should be enhanced and equipped with signalling systems which play roles in informing the other when the cyclists
want to switch their directions, as well as
individuals participating in traffic to learn gesture signals designed for cyclists
in place of the announcement by words. This
can be convenient for both bicycle drivers
and the types of transport operators.
In conclusion, the problems arising from sharing the same roads
between bicyclists and car drivers
are mainly about slower movements of cars
and unexpected incidents caused by cycle controllers changing their direction. However
, these can be positively solved by dividing roads
into smaller lanes and furnishing bicycles with signalling systems adding to design specific body language for cyclists
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