you will go to a foreign country to stay there for one year, and you need a place to live in. You have decided to write to an agency for accommodation. Write a letter to the agency to get information about accommodation. In your letter, say: why you are going to this country what kind of accommodation you want when you will arrive Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir,
I am writing
this
letter to get information about the prices of accommodation in Canada, because, I got admitted to college for the study of Project Management. I want to pursue this
study for my further
career preparations, along with
this
, I will also
look forward to a part-time job to take care of my expenses.
I am looking for accommodation near to my college in the city of Brampton. Moreover
, I need a furnished room with an attached washroom, and, sharing a kitchen I will need the room near the bus stop, shopping plaza, and grocery store. All the utilities such
as laundry, Internet, cleaning, and gas should be included in this
facility, and, the cost should be around $600.
My flight will land on the 1st of August, so I am looking from the 1st day of arriving. You will need to arrange a taxi from the airport, to deliver me to my residency.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully
XYZSubmitted by hkaur14165 on
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task achievement
To further improve, make sure to proofread the letter for minor grammatical errors and ensure all necessary details are included clearly. For instance, specify the name of the college you will be attending.
coherence
To enhance coherence, consider connecting your ideas more smoothly. You might want to use transition words and phrases to guide the reader through your letter more effectively.
coherence
The overall structure of your letter is logical and easy to follow. Each paragraph addresses a specific aspect of your request.
coherence
Your greeting and closing are appropriately formal and polite, which is suitable for this type of letter.
task achievement
You have clearly described the type of accommodation you are looking for, including key details about amenities and the location.
task achievement
The tone of your letter is polite and professional, which is suitable for a formal request to an agency.