The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

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bar charts illustrate the way how three different

countries

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(United Kingdom,

Korea

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, and Sweden ) counter with useless goods.

it is clear that

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underground is the most popular way of dealing with waste in 2

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incineration is the least useful way .

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, dumping at sea and chemical processes are solely in one country , which is the United Kingdom. in

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detail, recycling is used in Sweden and

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at 25% and 69% respectively,

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there is no recycling in the United Kingdom. underground digging accounted for the highest proportion in 2

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( UK and

Korea

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with 55% and 80%),

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it is the second most popular method in

Korea

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. moving into more information, there is a significant difference between the UK and the other 2

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in two additional categories , which are dumping at sea and chemical treatment

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, incineration makes up the lowest quantity in the UK

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the percentage of it in Sweden and

Korea

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is 20% and 9%.

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Topic Vocabulary:

Dangerous waste products
Waste management
Recycling
Incineration
Chemical treatment
Landfill
Disposal methods
Hazardous
Environmental protection
Sustainability
Waste reduction
Toxic substances
E-waste
Sanitary engineering
Biodegradable
Non-biodegradable
Regulations
Compliance
Contamination
Conservation

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Artificial Intelligence will soon replace teachers in the classroom. Do you agree with this statement?

Some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination while others think that there are more important factors such as money and appearance.Discuss both view and give your opinion.

Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas (in words, pictures, music or films) in whichever way they wish. There should be no government restrictions on what they do. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Everyone should stay in school until the age of eighteen, considering the significance of primary and secondary level education in a learner’s life. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Aircrafts have been increasingly used to transport fruit and vegetable to some countries where such plants hardly grow or out of season. Some people consider it a good idea but some people oppose it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.