in many countries, owing a home rather than renting one is very important for people. do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Many today assume that having a

home

is essential in today’s era.

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on

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statement, the writer of

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believe

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this

position is a positive situation

due to

the fact that it

is

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not only

decrease

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decreases

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the rate of

lacking

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of accommodation

,

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but

also

increase

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human’s

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humans

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marry

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opportunities. One of the core reasons

as to

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why

owing

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owning

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a

home

is vital for every single person is it can resolve the issue of figuring out a resident. To be more specific, overpopulation is a challenging problem that many nations deal with; if most

of

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citizens

may

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buy for themselves a apartment, the pressure of

lacking

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of accommodation

putted

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put

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on

government

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will be addressed efficiently.

That is

to say, there are more options for inhabitants

can

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who can

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not find an abode;

therefore

, it will lead

the

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price of renting a house

declined

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apply

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.

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on

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the argument that

owing

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owning

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a

home

supporting

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people

look

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looking

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for their partner easily. In fact, the population over the world is having a trend

keeping

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of keeping

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away from getting

marry

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married

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if their lover can not have enough as their demand (

owing

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owning

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a

home

, getting

well-paid

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a well-paid

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jod

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job

).

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, almost

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males can not have a girlfriend if their

fiancial

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financial

are

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not decent. As a

consequences

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consequence

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, investing in

home

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the home

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will bring

to

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apply

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an owner enormous advantages

as well as

rise

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raise

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their chance

in

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of

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moving into

romantic

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a romantic

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relationship. In conclusion,

with

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tackling the

home

crisis and contributing

on

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to

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developing

human’s

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human

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relationship

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relationships

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. It is

obivious

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obvious

to see that

owing

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owning

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a

home

plays a vital role in each

human-being

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human being

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lives

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life

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.