The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced.
The flow chart illustrates the production of
ethanol
through various stages involved along with
several tools used. Further
it demonstrates how Add a comma
Further,
this
ethanol
is utilized which is essential for vehicles.
Overall
, it is apparent from the diagrams that the production of it involves undergoing several stages such
as harvesting, pre-processing and adding microbes . This
ethanol
is then
used as fuel for the transport.
To begin
, trees and plants that receive energy from sunlight and carbon dioxide are grown to maturity . In the second step, there was harvesting which plants and trees are
collected by tractors and brought for pre-processing by farmers . Wrong verb form
were
Next,
after the pre-processing process, the items are sent to the next process for cellulose . then
in the laboratory
it is divided into "processing" to obtain sugar. Add a comma
laboratory,
At
Change preposition
In
next
stage, Correct article usage
the next
Ethanol
is obtained by adding microbes to ready-made sugar.
Ethanol
is used for cars , heavy tracks and airplanes
. All three vehicles emit carbon dioxide when they operate and the resulting carbon dioxide is consumed by plants and trees, Change the spelling
aeroplanes
thus
creating a biological cycleSubmitted by makemoneyizzy16 on
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