The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO²) emissions per person in the United Kingdom , Sweden, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO²) emissions per person in the United Kingdom , Sweden, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
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The line graph provides information regarding the average carbon dioxide emissions in metric
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per person in four countries— the United Kingdom,
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, Italy and Portugal— from 1967 to 2007.
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, it can be seen that there were upward trends in carbon dioxide emissions of Italy and Portugal,
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the release of the UK and
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saw downward trends. Despite experiencing a decline, the UK still be the country which emitted the most quantities of carbon dioxide over the period. Looking at the details, the UK started at over 10
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in 1967,
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it remained stable for 10 years, and after that, the figure continued to decrease steadily until it finished at over 8
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in 2007.
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witnessed a sharp rise at
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but
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was followed by a considerable fall to nearly 6
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at the end
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, Italy and Portugal
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shared similar trends: the emissions started at approximately 4
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and just under 2
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, after which they grew significantly to around 8
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and 5
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in 1997 respectively.
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although
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the figure for Italy stayed stable to the end, that of Portugal slightly increased and finished at the same figure as
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tonnes, sweden with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • carbon dioxide emissions
  • average emissions per person
  • trends
  • reduction
  • increase
  • comparison
  • contrast
  • pivotal years
  • industrial growth
  • policy changes
  • economic changes
  • energy sources
  • technology advancements
  • environmental policies
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