The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020.

summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the attendee
numbers
for five activities at a particular social centre in Melbourne, Australia from 2000 to 2020.
Overall
, the introduction of film
club
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clubs
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, table tennis and musical performances was more successful than others, with film
club
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clubs
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consistently holding the top spot in popularity over the period examined. Amateur dramatics,
on the other hand
, saw a significant decline
while
martial arts remained relatively unchanged in participation. The participant
numbers
of the film club started with around 65
members
in 2000, and
then
it experienced a slight dip to 60 participants by 2010 but rebounded to its original number by 2020, showing enduring appeal.
This
is
also
shown in Martial arts as its participation has remained steady, starting and ending the period with about 35
members
.
Conversely
, amateur dramatics have seen a sharp decline.
Initially
attracting 25 participants, the
numbers
steadily dropped to a mere 5 by 2020. Regarding the two leisure activities that gained traction, there were 15 participants in tennis in 2000, after which the
numbers
surged to 55 by 2020.
Lastly
, it was not until 2005
musical
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that musical
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performances were introduced to the centre and it had been quite successful as its
members
gradually increased to 15
members
at the end
of the period.
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