The table below gives information about rail transport in four countries. TASK 1

The table below gives information about rail transport in four countries. TASK 1
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The table displays the information on rail shipments in the
UK
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,
USA
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,
Japan
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, and Italy.
Overall
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, The rail transit used by each country consists of the details of passenger count, average kilometres used and shipping materials weight. Each country shined in each category
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as the
UK
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holds higher population usage
whereas
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Japan
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and Italy
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by a distance of travellers.
on the other hand
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, cargo carrying peaked in the
USA
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. The dependence on rail transfer without involving metro count was high in the
UK
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and Italy up to 5.9 and 5.5. In the meantime, the
USA
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and
Japan
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were on less count as 0.3 and 27.
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each passenger managed kilometres shown peak level in
Japan
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compared to other nations
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the
UK
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and Italy presented more or less the same volume like 770 and 780 respectively.
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, The
USA
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describe the least travelled distance. The cargo delivery method was the most dominant usage in the
USA
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at about 2820
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minimal people used it in the
UK
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(22.2),
Japan
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(23.01) and Italy (21.9) appropriately.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words uk, usa, japan with synonyms.
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