The charts below show the proportion of the energy produced from different sources in a country between 1985 and 2003 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons with relevant.

#show #proportion #energy #sources #country #information #features #comparisons

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?

The bar charts compare data about how people

gain

Wrong verb form

gained

show examples

energy from a variety of sources between 1985 and 2003.

Overall

Linking Words

, oil was the main resource which provided us with energy in 1985 and 2003 respectively,

however

Linking Words

, oil demand decreased, the reverse was true for natural gas by the end of the period. Following that, natural

vapor

Change the spelling

vapour

show examples

, coal and other renewable origin increased over time. In 1985, the main focus was on grease at 52% because it is the most significant item that we get strength from. There are

also

Linking Words

essential efficiency

cause

Fix the agreement mistake

causes

show examples

such

Linking Words

as nuclear and natural gas with a usage percentage of 22% and 13% respectively. The average share of other energy resources is only about 5%.

On the other hand

Linking Words

, in 2003, compared to 1985 the situation did not change much,

however

Linking Words

, the grease spirit and nuclear efficiency declined to 39% and 17% respectively. On the other side, the proportion of using natural

vapor

Change the spelling

vapour

show examples

rose to 23%.

Moreover

Linking Words

, coal power and other renewable origin increased to 13% and 4% cooperatively.

Nevertheless

Linking Words

, the hydrogen staff remained unchanged.

Submitted by isrofildavrushov on Sat Jun 22 2024

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Sentences: Add more complex sentences.

▼

Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".

▼

Vocabulary: The word "compare" was used 2 times.

▼

Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.

▼

Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

▼

7
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

178 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

7
band
You recently bought some train tickets for a journey a week in advance. When you want to the station to catch the train, you were told you could not use the tickets and the staff were very unhelpful to you. Write a letter to the train company. In your letter * Describe the problem you had with the tickets * Say why you were unhappy with the staff * Suggest what action the train company should take
I hope this letter finds you in good health. I am writing this letter to express my dissastification of your staff service quality when I need assistance.
<4
band
Nowadays, some older people choose to live in the retirement communities with other people, rather than living with their adult children. Is it a positive or negative development?
Today, it is common belief that the old select to live in the aged care placements after retirement. some people argue that it has negative effects. However, I think it will overweigh negative effects.
7
band
“Some people believe that the best way to reduce crime is to increase the length of the prison sentence. Other people, however, believe there are better methods to reduce crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.”
It appears that people have divided opinions on how criminal offences can be solved. Some argue that a rise in the duration of a prison sentence would be the solution while others suggest that there are other more suitable alternatives. In my opinion, both arguments have their merits.
7.5
band
Some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination, while others think that there are more important factors such as money and appearence. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some individuals believe that to be successful, it is essential to work hard with high willpower. However, others think that other components, such as money and appearance, play a vital role in success in life. While I agree that money and appearance may influence success, they are not permanent and crucial compared with hard work. This essay will explore several reasons to support this perspective.
6
band
You are interested in applying for a scholarship program to study at a foreign university Write a letter to the international counsellor at the university In your letter ❑ explain which course you are interested in ❑ tell what you know about the university ❑ state why you should receive the scholarship Begin with ‘Dear Sir or Madam,’ Do not write any addresses. Write at least 15O words
I am writing this letter with regard to the scholarship program to study at Toronto University in the Sunday Times on June 21st, 2024.

The charts below show the proportion of the energy produced from different sources in a country between 1985 and 2003 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons with relevant.

Nowadays, some older people choose to live in the retirement communities with other people, rather than living with their adult children. Is it a positive or negative development?

“Some people believe that the best way to reduce crime is to increase the length of the prison sentence. Other people, however, believe there are better methods to reduce crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.”

Some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination, while others think that there are more important factors such as money and appearence. Discuss both views and give your opinion.