The charts below show the proportion of the energy produced from different sources in a country between 1985 and 2003 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons with relevant.
The bar charts compare data about how people
gain
energy from a variety of sources between 1985 and 2003.
Wrong verb form
gained
Overall
, oil was the main resource which provided us with energy in 1985 and 2003 respectively, however
, oil demand decreased, the reverse was true for natural gas by the end of the period. Following that, natural vapor
, coal and other renewable origin increased over time.
In 1985, the main focus was on grease at 52% because it is the most significant item that we get strength from. There are Change the spelling
vapour
also
essential efficiency cause
Fix the agreement mistake
causes
such
as nuclear and natural gas with a usage percentage of 22% and 13% respectively. The average share of other energy resources is only about 5%.
On the other hand
, in 2003, compared to 1985 the situation did not change much, however
, the grease spirit and nuclear efficiency declined to 39% and 17% respectively. On the other side, the proportion of using natural vapor
rose to 23%. Change the spelling
vapour
Moreover
, coal power and other renewable origin increased to 13% and 4% cooperatively. Nevertheless
, the hydrogen staff remained unchanged.Submitted by isrofildavrushov on
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