The following diagram shows how greenhouse gases trap energy from the Sun.
The diagram illustrates how some of the Sun’s
energy
is trapped in the Use synonyms
atmosphere
by greenhouse gases.
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Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
CO2 is released to the Linking Words
atmosphere
by human intervention and that most of the Sun’s Use synonyms
energy
managed to leave the planet.
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To begin
with, not all of the Sun’s Linking Words
energy
enters the Earth’s Use synonyms
atmosphere
, some of it is reflected by the Use synonyms
atmosphere
. Use synonyms
Rest
of the rays Correct article usage
The rest
enters
the Change the verb form
enter
atmosphere
and Use synonyms
heats
the Earth’s surface, after which some of them are reflected into space and some of them back into the Correct subject-verb agreement
heat
atmosphere
.
Greenhouse gases, Use synonyms
such
as carbon dioxide are emitted into the air by human activities. Chopping down Linking Words
of
trees Change preposition
apply
release
the CO2 that had been stored in them. Fumes produced by vehicles, namely trucks, cars, and ships, contribute to the carbon dioxide emission. Correct subject-verb agreement
releases
Subsequently
, these gases capture the remaining Linking Words
energy
that had been reflected by the Earth’s surface leading to a substantial increase of the atmospheric temperature.Use synonyms
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