The pie charts below show the types of media used from 1990 to 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show the types of media used from 1990 to 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts provide information about several kinds of media used between 1990 and 2000.
Overall
, in the year 1990, compact
disk
(cd) was the largest segment, in the year 2000 the well compact
disk
made up the biggest part of the chart. Regarding the smallest segment in 1990 both cassette and vinyl records had similar use rates, and in 2000 digital audio made the lowest contribution. Compact
Disk
made up 55% almost the half of used rate in 1990,
in addition
, the cassette was 25% and
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vinyl record was 20% with a 5% difference in usage rates between them. In 2000 compact
disk
increased by 40% and got 95% which was a huge rise, digital audio was a new type of media and had the lowest percentage between 1990 and 2000 5% The cassette and the vinyl record were no longer used in 2000,
however
, the compact
disk
rose in 2000 and got more popularity, unlike digital audio wasn't used by high percentages.
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  • proportion
  • percentage
  • dominant
  • marginal
  • fluctuate
  • emerge
  • decline
  • increase
  • stability
  • predominant
  • trend
  • shift
  • notable
  • minimal
  • marginalize
  • contrast
  • highlight
  • consumption
  • landscape
  • transition
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