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The char below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015

#char #households #income
The bar chart illustrates the annual salary of families in the US in 2007, 2011, and 2015. In general,
while
 another income group tended to fluctuate, the group from 50 to 99 witnessed a steady. Having looked at the given chart for more details, in 2007, 25
million
 households had a budget of less than 25.000, and
this
 number significantly increased to 29.000 after 4 years and slightly dropped in 2015.
Similarly
, the number of families having a budget between 25 and under 50 went up by nearly 3
million
 in 2011 and decreased in 2015.
By contrast
, the
quantity
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 of people having over 100 thousand in income went down by approximately 2
million
 in 2011 before rising and peaking at 33
million
 in 2015. Related to fluctuating trends, the salaries of people around 55 to 75 thousand remained steady.
Besides
, the remaining group has a slight variation but it still levelled off under 15
million
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