The maps illustrate the changes in the Local Museum at the north-east corner of Hartford Street and Redcliff Street in three separate years: 1957, 1987, 2007.
The maps demonstrate the information on how changes
made
in the local Add a missing verb
were made
museum
at the northeast corner of Hartford street
and Redcliff Capitalize word
Street
street
in various periods 1957, 1987 and 2007.
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Street
Overall
, it is clear that
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trees
were removed and museum
was expanded by new sections.
In detail, in 1987, the middle of the Add an article
the museum
a museum
museum
had three sections but it was expanded by six cabins. Entrance
hall area was shifted Correct article usage
The entrance
by
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to
northwest
side in 2007. In the southeast, Correct article usage
the northwest
trees
were removed and the museum
was expanded. To the southwest, two trees
were eliminated and new car parking was introduced in 2007.
Furthermore
, cafe
, local history room, special exhibition, education Correct article usage
a cafe
center
, Change the spelling
centre
museum
shop and reception areas were built in 2007. In the northeast of the museum
in 1957, three big trees
were expelled and the new museum
was extended by new features for readers.Submitted by reanudeepan on
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