the diagram below shows the process for recyling plastic bottles

the diagram below shows the process for recyling plastic bottles
The diagram illustrates the
plastic
bottle
recycle
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recycling
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process.
Overall
, the
recycle
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recycling
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process consists of nine steps , starting from
droping
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dropping
it in dustbins to producing products like bags
dress
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dresses
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and so on. As the
illustraion
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illustration
depicits
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depicts
deficits
, the first step
og
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of
recycling
plastic
bottles
begins with people
disgarding
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disregarding
discarding
bottles
in
bin
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bins
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.Which is
then
taken and moved to
recycling
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the recycling
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centre by garbage trucks . In the recycling centre sorting takes place , after it is sorted into goods and bads ,
then
it is compressed into
blockes
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blocks
blocked
. In the next
step
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it is crushed into small pieces and
then
moved to water tubs to get it washed. The clean small waste particles
is
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are
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then
moved to a machine that produces
plastic
pellets . With the help of heat , the pellets form raw material .
This
is how raw materials are formed
form
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from
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waste
plastic
bottles
. These raw materials are
then
converted into
usefull
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useful
products
such
as bags ,t-shirts ,
bottles
,
stationaries
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and stationaries
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and brought into
market
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the market
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.
This
process takes place in a loop and
also
helps in providing a good environment.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic, bottles with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "moved" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • recycling
  • mitigate
  • environmental impact
  • landfills
  • conservation
  • sorted
  • residual waste
  • adhesives
  • shredded
  • pellets
  • manufacturing
  • ecological
  • economical
  • sustainable
  • automation
  • raw material
  • life cycle
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