The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981,1991 and 2001.

The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981,1991 and 2001.
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The three pie charts describe the differences in utilities and allowances
in particular
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UK schools during 1981, 1991, and 2001.
Overall
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, The annual school spending showed significant change over a decade in various aspects especially insurance which showed a gradual improvement throughout the year
while
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the other workers' salaries sharply decreased
at the end
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of the year. Insurance, which experienced steady improvement compared to other sectors over the decennium began with 2% in 1981, 3% in 1991 and 8% in 2001 respectively.
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, the second leading most spent ratio was for teachers' salaries and furniture and equipment that accounted for 40% and 15% in 1981 and progressed and maintained to 45% and 23% in 2001 with fluctuation slightly in the middle of the year 1991 as peaked 50% in salary and sudden dip around 5% in utility before reaching larger. Resources like books and other workers' salaries dramatically became less
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the years.
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, books proportions as 15%, 20%, and 9% in 1981, 1991 and 2001 appropriately.
Also
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, 28%, 22% and 15% in other workers pay in the years 1981, 1991, and 2001.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • budget allocation
  • educational expenditure
  • financial management
  • infrastructure investment
  • evolution of costs
  • annual spending
  • strategic funding
  • capital outlay
  • operational costs
  • resource allocation
  • fiscal trends
  • cost analysis
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