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The chart below show the number of magazines sold per person in five countries in 2003 and 2005, with projected sales for 2007. Summarize the information by describing the main features of the charts and making comparisons where appropriate.

The chart below show the number of magazines sold per person in five countries in 2003 and 2005, with projected sales for 2007. Summarize the information by describing the main features of the charts and making comparisons where appropriate.
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The bar graph illustrates the number of magazines sold per
person
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 from 2003 and 2005 with a future projection for 2007 in five nations.
Overall
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,
country
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 b sold more newspapers as compared to others and
country
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 e sold the least amount of newspapers in all years and the projection shows that
country
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 b will be the highest in numbers for the upcoming year and
country
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 e will be lowest. It is conspicuous that
country
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 b sold 50 paper per man in 2003, which declined to about 46 per
person
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 in 2005 and it will continue declining at 45 people till 2007.
In addition
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, the
country
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 a
also
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 experienced downturn, which was 49 per
person
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 in 2005 and with a reduction to 45 per
person
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 in the year 2005 and it will keep falling to nearly 38 per body in 2007.
On the other hand
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, the
country
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 d experienced some expansion at 18 per
person
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 in 2003 and increased at 20 per
person
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 and projected an expansion at 23 per individual in 2007. Probing ahead, the
country
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 c sold 36 booklets in 2003, with a
further
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 downturned reach at 33 per
person
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 in 2005 and in the future, it will be 32 per
person
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 in 2007.
Moreover
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, the
country
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 e sold magazines 3 per
person
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 in 2003 with a growth of 5 per body in 2005 and it will reduce by 3 per body in 2007.
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