The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.
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The
given
pie charts illustrate data about the police budget from 2017 to 2018 in Britain. And Verb problem
apply
also
specifies where the money comes from and how it is expended.
Overall
, the greatest expansion are
Salaries(officers and staff). Change the verb form
is
However
, technology increased almost 1 time which is interesting. uniquely, Buildings and transport remained in the same position. National government and
seems to be the most gigantic resource among the three resources(Local taxes and other sources).
Regarding the sources, in 2017 and 2018, Correct word choice
apply
national
government Correct article usage
the national
plays
Wrong verb form
played
big
role towards total( 304.7 million pounds, Add an article
a big
318.6
million pounds respectively) followed by local taxes(91.2m and 102.5m) and Other sources(38m and 38.5m).
In 2017 and 2018, police spent the most money on servants' salaries, Correct word choice
and 318.6
nevertheless
, it declined slightly from 75% to 69% within a year. In contrast
, the government spends least
on technological equipment(8% to 14%). Interestingly, they still retained the building and transport with 17% of both years.Correct article usage
the least
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