The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.

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The

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pie charts illustrate data about the police budget from 2017 to 2018 in Britain. And

also

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specifies where the money comes from and how it is expended.

Overall

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, the greatest expansion

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Salaries(officers and staff).

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, technology increased almost 1 time which is interesting. uniquely, Buildings and transport remained in the same position. National government

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seems to be the most gigantic resource among the three resources(Local taxes and other sources). Regarding the sources, in 2017 and 2018,

national

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government

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big

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role towards total( 304.7 million pounds,

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and 318.6

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million pounds respectively) followed by local taxes(91.2m and 102.5m) and Other sources(38m and 38.5m). In 2017 and 2018, police spent the most money on servants' salaries,

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, it declined slightly from 75% to 69% within a year.

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, the government spends

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on technological equipment(8% to 14%). Interestingly, they still retained the building and transport with 17% of both years.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words m with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

152 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

budget
funding sources
national government
local taxes
distribution
allocation
salaries
technology
infrastructure
workforce expenses
modernization
investment
fluctuation
financial planning
policy direction

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