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The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas. Write a areport for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas. Write a areport for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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The supplied line graph indicates information about how
wheat
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 was exported in three various
region
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regions
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 over a
five year
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 period. It can be clearly seen that
,
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the highest amount of
wheat
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 exported was for Canada.
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,in
Australia
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Australia,
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 the community did not tend to send
wheat
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to
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abroad,which was the least amount of exportation over the period. In 1985,just under 20
million
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tonnes
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wheat
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of wheat
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 was transported from Canada to other countries and
then
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 It fluctuated
sharpy
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sharply
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 from 1985 to 1990.Surprisingly,in 1988 precisely 25
million
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tonnes
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wheat
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sent
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 abroad from Canada.(Which was the highest measure of exportation over the whole period).Next,the level of
wheat
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 exported from
European
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the European
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 Community was roughly 16
million
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tonnes
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 in 1985 and after a modest decline,It rose gradually in European populations between 1986 and 1990 and
finally
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 reached
to
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over 20
million
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tonnes
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at the end
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 of the trend. In Australia,exactly 15
million
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tonnes
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wheat
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 was shipped to other areas in 1985 and
then
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,It climbed slightly to nearly 16
million
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tonnes
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 in 1986.
Aftreward
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Afterwards
,the quantity of
wheat
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 which was transported from Australia experienced a modest fall from 1986 to 1990 and
then
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 hit the bottom of the level to just around 12
million
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tonnes
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 in 1990.(Which was the least amount of exportation over the whole year).
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Vocabulary: Replace the words wheat, million, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "modest" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • wheat exports
  • trend
  • significant increases
  • significant decreases
  • fluctuations
  • periods of stability
  • analyze
  • compare and contrast
  • similarities
  • differences
  • key points
  • potential reasons
  • climatic conditions
  • agricultural policies
  • market demand
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