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The table shows the results of a survey of people's perception of celebrity news coverage

The table shows the results of a survey of people's perception of celebrity news coverage
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The table given provides
the
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data about
people
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's
opinion
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opinions
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 of media coverage of celebrities based on a particular survey.
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, the majority of
people
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 think that
celebrities
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celebrity
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news
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 is publicized too much
on
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in
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media
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the media
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. The vast majority of those asked (85%) believed that famous
people
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 received too much
news
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 coverage. Meanwhile, only 6% of
people
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complaint
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of
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about
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 the little
news
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 about the stars and the percentage of
people
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thought
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 that there was a right amount was 7%. Over half of
people
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 (56%) agreed that
news
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 organisations should be to blame.
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, 34% of
people
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 considered that the public
are
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 the one who should have responsibility
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while
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 only a small proportion of them (7%) blamed both. Television
news
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were
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 said to give the superstars the most
with
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coverage (60%) followed by internet
news
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 websites, newspapers and radio
news
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 with 15%, 12% and 5% respectively.
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, only 3% of
people
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 thought differently, it was the others, not the aforementioned factors.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, news with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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