The table shows the results of a survey of people's perception of celebrity news coverage

The table shows the results of a survey of people's perception of celebrity news coverage
The table given provides
the
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data about
people
's
opinion
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opinions
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of media coverage of celebrities based on a particular survey.
Overall
, the majority of
people
think that
celebrities
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news
is publicized too much
on
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media
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. The vast majority of those asked (85%) believed that famous
people
received too much
news
coverage. Meanwhile, only 6% of
people
complaint
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of
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the little
news
about the stars and the percentage of
people
thought
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that there was a right amount was 7%. Over half of
people
(56%) agreed that
news
organisations should be to blame.
However
, 34% of
people
considered that the public
are
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the one who should have responsibility
for
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while
only a small proportion of them (7%) blamed both. Television
news
were
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said to give the superstars the most
with
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coverage (60%) followed by internet
news
websites, newspapers and radio
news
with 15%, 12% and 5% respectively.
Otherwise
, only 3% of
people
thought differently, it was the others, not the aforementioned factors.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, news with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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