The pie chart below shows information about where coffee is produced, consumed and where is profit goes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart below shows information about where coffee is produced, consumed and where is profit goes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The 3 pie charts
gives
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information about
the
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coffee
production and
consumption
in 5 different areas and how the
profit
is spread out.
Overall
, it is worth noting that
although
South
America
accounted for the largest proportion of
the
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coffee
production,
however
, the region that has
highest
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consumption
is Central
America
.
Additionally
, the majority of
profit
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the profit
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is distributed to
shipper
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the shipper
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. 44% of
coffee
is produced in South
America
,
in contrast
to Oceania, where only 2% production. The figures for Africa, Central
America
and Asia are relatively close, at 19%, 17% and 18%, respectively.
However
, the
coffee
consumption
in Central
America
and Asia
is exceed
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that of Japan and South
America
, which made up
to
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more than half of the total
consumption
. The
profit
distribution among explore, producer, shipper and seller
are
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not
equally
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.
While
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the shipper
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shipper
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gain
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the highest percentage of the
profit
, at 55%,
explorer
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explorers
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only received under 10% of the total. Seller ranked second with 27%, and the remaining belongs to
producer
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the producer
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, consumption, profit, america with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global production
  • consumption patterns
  • profit distribution
  • key regions
  • significant portion
  • coffee supply chain
  • discrepancies
  • marketers
  • coffee retailers
  • percentage
  • capture
  • minimal
  • comparative analysis
  • data points
  • examining
  • reveals
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