Nowadays many people travel to foreign coutries foe pleasure. Some believe this travel has a negative impact on the coutries travelled to. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A number of people believe that

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a journey as

tourist

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a tourist

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to

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overseas

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the

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negative

impacts

for

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the

countries

as the destinations. In my opinion, These are numerous possibilities,

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travelers

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travellers

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can

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can

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contribute

for

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areas' development and it

is

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positive

impacts

for

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on

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that

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zones.

Traveling

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is one of

popular

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the popular

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activity

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activities

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that people do for various reasons, commonly the communities do some journey

for

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to

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recahart

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recharge

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their energy from

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among of pressure from their occupation or

society

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issues.

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travelling

treveling

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they can forget

their

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previous activities

that they

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have and

make

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the

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joyful moments for a

while

. Commonly, people consider that other

countries

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the best option to be visited,

due to

the fact they can encounter new things, in the same time, the touring can establish massive experiences which they never see previously in their original place.

Consequently

, foreigners can lead a different for that place and occasionally it is capable

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of changing

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and

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original cultures that

exist

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in that zone for

long

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time,

as well as

, foreigners can

also

become

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pioneer

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pioneers

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of crime

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groups

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and recognize

a

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new negative

item

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items

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for the locals

such

as drugs and alcohol.

However

, with clear regulations from the government, it is possible to limit the types of harmful issues which can be

huge

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a huge

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concern for the

local

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locals

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.

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the same time, these activities can significantly guide a major development for that zone as

impacts

of economic growth from the

tourist

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tourists

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,

for example

, the tiny

business

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businesses

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such

as souvenirs or food

store

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stores

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can receive the benefits from the

tourist

existence.

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,

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tourist

can be good

promoter

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promoters

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for some

countries

as

effect

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the effect

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of social media utilization that commonly they use for recording their journey

such

as

,

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apply

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creating a video regarding their trips and

upload

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uploading

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in

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it

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their

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to their

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social

medias

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media

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.

Additionally

, the government can obtain additional income from various

method

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methods

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,

such

as tax and visa prices as fundamental

requirement

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requirements

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to come into the

countries

. In conclusion, the possibilities of negative

impacts

of

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on

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visitors can be

major

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a major

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concern for

the

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society. Yet,

the

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tourist

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tourists

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also

receive

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positive

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a positive

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impact

for

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on

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the

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communities in numerous sectors.