The chart below shows the number of adults participating in different major sports in one area, in 1997 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows the number of adults participating in different major sports in one area, in 1997 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The chart illustrates the number of adults participating in different major

sports

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in one area, in 1997 and 2017 , it shows the difference between the

years

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and the number of people

interstates

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in interstates

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and it is divided into 7

sports

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Overall

Linking Words

as it has shown the biggest percentage is in Tennis in 1997 its 50 adults and in the year 2017 it's about 55 it is not a big difference between the

years

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because the

sports

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Correct subject-verb agreement

are

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not boring , for basketball the percentage was less it means basketball is not a common

sport

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in 1997 but in 2017 it has a big great turnout , cricket in 1997 was famous and a lot of people wants to participate but in 2017 everything changed , in the Golf there is no a big change between the

years

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it is a classic

sport

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, Swimming is an interesting

sport

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and many people love it so there is not a changed ,Football has more popularity in 2017

also

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Rugby in

sum

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sum,

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I could say the biggest percentage in all

sports

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is Tennis because Tennis is a classic

sport

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, easy and funny

however

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golf

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golf,

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there is not a big difference between the two

years

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the reason back for the

sport

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is so fun .

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 90%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words sports, years, sport with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.

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3
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

213 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

participation rate
increase/decrease in numbers
trend
decade
relatively stable
major sports
potential reasons
contributing factors
public interest
comparison

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The chart below shows the number of adults participating in different major sports in one area, in 1997 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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