The chart below shows the number of adults participating in different major sports in one area, in 1997 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates the number of adults participating in different major
sports
in one area, in 1997 and 2017 , it shows the difference between the years
and the number of people interstates
and it is divided into 7 Change preposition
in interstates
sports
.
Overall
as it has shown the biggest percentage is in Tennis in 1997 its 50 adults and in the year 2017 it's about 55 it is not a big difference between the years
because the sports
is
not boring , for basketball the percentage was less it means basketball is not a common Correct subject-verb agreement
are
sport
in 1997 but in 2017 it has a big great turnout , cricket in 1997 was famous and a lot of people wants to participate but in 2017 everything changed , in the Golf there is no a big change between the years
it is a classic sport
, Swimming is an interesting sport
and many people love it so there is not a changed ,Football has more popularity in 2017 also
Rugby
in sum
I could say the biggest percentage in all Add a comma
sum,
sports
is Tennis because Tennis is a classic sport
, easy and funny however
in golf
there is not a big difference between the two Add a comma
golf,
years
the reason back for the sport
is so fun .Submitted by albaikhoor on
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