The table below shows the sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the sales of products that a
coffee
shop in an office building made.
Overall
,
coffee
was the most popular product, followed by pastries
while
tea
was the least common. The earliest morning seemed to be the
time
when people ordered more
coffee
,
tea
and pastries than any other
time
being examined. Starting with more popular products,
coffee
was the most dominant with its total sales reaching 795.
For instance
, the morning period between 7:30 and 10:30 had the most
sale
with 265, followed by 200 between 5:30 and 8:30.
However
, there was the least number of its order from 2:30 to 5:30 with 145.
In addition
, 275 numbers of pastries, the second popular products, whose total
sale
was 600, were sold within the first three hours
while
their
sale
declined to 95 from 10:30 and 2:30 and 80 from 5:30 and 8:30. Turning to the rest of the graph for
tea
and sandwiches, the former remained the least common for most of the
time
with less than 100 as only 35 cups of
tea
were drunken between 2:30 and 5:30.
In contrast
, the morning period from 7:30 and 10:30 had the most
sale
with 110. Indeed, the largest number of sandwiches were sold at 200 from 10:30 and 2:30, which was nearly double from the
sale
from 5:30 to 8:30
whereas
they were less likely to be purchased with 50 or less in the rest of the
time
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, tea, time, sale with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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