The table below shows the sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The table illustrates the sales of products that a

coffee

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shop in an office building made.

Overall

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coffee

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was the most popular product, followed by pastries

while

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tea

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was the least common. The earliest morning seemed to be the

time

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when people ordered more

coffee

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tea

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and pastries than any other

time

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being examined. Starting with more popular products,

coffee

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was the most dominant with its total sales reaching 795.

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, the morning period between 7:30 and 10:30 had the most

sale

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with 265, followed by 200 between 5:30 and 8:30.

However

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, there was the least number of its order from 2:30 to 5:30 with 145.

In addition

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, 275 numbers of pastries, the second popular products, whose total

sale

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was 600, were sold within the first three hours

while

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their

sale

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declined to 95 from 10:30 and 2:30 and 80 from 5:30 and 8:30. Turning to the rest of the graph for

tea

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and sandwiches, the former remained the least common for most of the

time

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with less than 100 as only 35 cups of

tea

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were drunken between 2:30 and 5:30.

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, the morning period from 7:30 and 10:30 had the most

sale

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with 110. Indeed, the largest number of sandwiches were sold at 200 from 10:30 and 2:30, which was nearly double from the

sale

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from 5:30 to 8:30

whereas

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they were less likely to be purchased with 50 or less in the rest of the

time

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, tea, time, sale with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.

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7
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
4
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

241 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

peak hours
trough in sales
high consumer demand
lunchtime surge
light meals
caffeine boost
sustained interest
fluctuate
comparison of products
typical weekday
busiest period

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The table below shows the sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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