Nowadays,
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a basic necessity.
People
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using
technology
.
Moreover
,
technology
also
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negative effects.
ThisChange preposition
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technology
.
On the one hand, the
advance of
technology
can give more valuable benefits for all users. There are some products of
technology
like
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, mobile
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and
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. First is
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.
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helpChange the verb form
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some
people
to finish working effectively like
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,
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, audit and It can integrated with all
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around
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the world nothing meeting directly.
Secondly
is
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, It is as media teach and learn so both
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teachers and students can access more knowledge via
technology
. Next in
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sectors, It can
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to
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,
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and discussion between netizens.
For example
, the leader of
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can share more information via mobile handphone.
Lastly
,
technology
also
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a Change preposition
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country.
For instance
, the government offer services in offices, public
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, public facilities and others.
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progress of a country can be seen
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how every
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can
access
technology
easily.
On the other hand
,
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technology
also
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dangerous effects
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for
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generation.
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everyone can use
technology
whenever and wherever
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want.
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negative cause is
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. Most
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teenagers start
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adults when they have met with a new
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in school.
For example
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students have a community in school and
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negative
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other
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.
Secondly
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media social like
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,
facebookCapitalize word
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and tiktok even illegal
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. It's not uncommon
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generation
useFix the infinitive
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technology
dont Verb problem
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related
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their age.
For instance
, children access pornography
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.
My perspective,
technology
can be positive and can
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negative results
dependsWrong verb form
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on the
people
. So, the government have to block every negative website and collaborate with
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to educate about
technology
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