In many countries, the government prioritises economic growth above all other concerns. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this.

In many nations,

governments

put more focus on improving their economies than improving other sectors.

Although

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residents’ earnings will increase, I personally believe that the main drawback outweighs the main benefit as

this

will cause environmental

pollution

. The main benefit of prioritising economic growth rather than other issues by

governments

is that people will earn higher

income

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.

This

is because

governments

will support companies to run their businesses more effectively.

As a result

, companies will gain more profits and consequentially pay their employees bigger bonuses or higher wages.

For instance

, In China, businesses make huge revenue

due to

its strong economy.

Therefore

, Chinese citizens are paid higher and can spend money on

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luxury

products and travelling abroad.

However

, I personally believe that earning more money cannot offset

pollution

problems that happen after economic growth prioritisation. The primary downside of putting more focus on economic development than other concerns by

governments

is that

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environments

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environment

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will be polluted.

This

is because there will be far more new-built factories

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the economic expansion. Without ecological concerns, the air will be polluted

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carbon dioxide and fumes which are emitted from these factories, and rivers will be polluted by industrial sewage from manufacturing and chemical processes.

For example

, Beijing, China, is facing a hazardous level of

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air

pollution

caused by fuel burning and chemical reactions from industrial areas. As a clean environment is extremely vital for

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human life, I

therefore

think that the main drawback outweighs its key benefit.

To conclude

,

although

people will earn higher income if the government prioritises the economic sector rather than other sectors, the serious

drawback

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drawbacks

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as

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pollution

problems far

outweighs

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the

advantage

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advantages

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.