The word train ing seems to be miswritten. Consider replacing it.
It appears that the form of the verb agree does not work with am in this sentence.
If you don’t want traning to be marked as misspelled in the future, you can add it to your personal dictionary.
It appears that you are missing a comma or two with the interrupter especially in some fields such as, technical science. Consider adding the comma(s).
Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.
It appears that the comma after such as is unnecessary. Consider removing it.
If you don’t want acadimic to be marked as misspelled in the future, you can add it to your personal dictionary.
It seems that there is an article usage problem here.
The word trining doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.
The word most should be capitalized in this context.
If you don’t want secess to be marked as misspelled in the future, you can add it to your personal dictionary.
It seems that you are missing a verb. Consider adding it.
If you don’t want stafs to be marked as misspelled in the future, you can add it to your personal dictionary.
It seems that there is a pronoun problem here.
The noun phrase good experience seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.