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people
believe that we must think about our nation's Use synonyms
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people'
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people's
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are like our family and more important to us, I disagree with Use synonyms
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in
people
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the under-poverty-line
an under-poverty-line
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I try to contribute to national charity as much as I can.
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can't
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in
mind
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the mind
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put
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overseas
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must be put first as they are more desirable to get help.Use synonyms
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