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The chart below gives information about Southland’s main exports in 2000,*20.., and future projections for 2025. Summaerise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below gives information about Southland’s main exports in 2000,*20.., and future projections for 2025. Summaerise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant
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The bar chart illustrates Southland's major export in 2000,2024 and estimates for 2025.
Overall
, there has been an increase in the exports of international
torism
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tourism
terrorism
 and dairy products.
However
, meat
prodects
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products
 have decreased.
According to
 what is shown, the amount of international
torism
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tourism
terrorism
 has increased by $ 1
billion
 from its $ 8
billion
 in 2000 and it is predicted to increase by the same amount by 2025. The
billion
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billions
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 of pounds for dairy products had risen the largest growth and
have
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has
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 increased from $ 7
billion
 in 2000 to $ 10
billion
 in 2024 and it is expected to drop by half of
billion
2025
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in 2025
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.
In addition
, there has been a gradual drop in the
billion
of
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apply
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pound for meat products $ 6
billion
 in 2000 to around $ 5.5
billion
 in 2024 and it will go down to $ 5
billion
 in 2025.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.
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