The chart below gives information about Southland’s main exports in 2000,*20.., and future projections for 2025. Summaerise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant

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The bar chart illustrates Southland's major export in 2000,2024 and estimates for 2025.

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, there has been an increase in the exports of international

torism

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tourism

terrorism

and dairy products.

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, meat

prodects

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products

have decreased.

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what is shown, the amount of international

torism

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tourism

terrorism

has increased by $ 1

billion

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from its $ 8

billion

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in 2000 and it is predicted to increase by the same amount by 2025. The

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of pounds for dairy products had risen the largest growth and

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increased from $ 7

billion

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in 2000 to $ 10

billion

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in 2024 and it is expected to drop by half of

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2025

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in 2025

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In addition

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, there has been a gradual drop in the

billion

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pound for meat products $ 6

billion

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in 2000 to around $ 5.5

billion

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in 2024 and it will go down to $ 5

billion

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in 2025.

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