The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent

their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and

make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart indicates the average weekly spending by families in 1968 and 2018. The family spending was divided into 8 categories,
such
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as
food
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, housing, fuel and power, clothing and
footware
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footwear
, household
goods
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, personal
goods
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, transport and
leisure
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. The largest category of family spending in 1968 was
food
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, whilst in 2019 it was
leisure
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. In 1968, the average family allocated 35% of
theirweekly
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their weekly
income to
food
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. Both housing and clothing and
footware
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footwear
contributed 10% to the total
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fund.
Whereas
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, the other sectors,
such
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as household, personal, transport and
leisure
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, accounted for approximately 7-8%.
Moreover
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, they spent the least on fuel and power with only 6%. The number changed a lot in 2018, most households no longer spent their money on buying meals the most. In fact, the percentage of
food
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spending saw a drop to 16%. Meanwhile, the allocation for
accomodation
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accommodation
and
leisure
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almost doubled from 10% to 19% for housing and 9% to 21% for
leisure
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.
Thus
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, in 2018 people tend to spend their money on their spare time. The transport cost
also
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experienced a significant increase albeit the smaller one, only about
7
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% rise.
Additionally
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,
the
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household
goods
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spending was stagnant from 1968 to 2018.
In contrast
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, fuel and power, clothing and
footware
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footwear
, and personal
goods
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spendings
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spending
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experienced the same trend as
the
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food
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spending.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "such".
Vocabulary: Replace the words food, goods, leisure with synonyms.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • compare
  • spending patterns
  • allocated
  • weekly income
  • significant changes
  • essential items
  • food
  • housing
  • clothing
  • leisure
  • communication
  • increase
  • decrease
  • twofold rise
  • substantial increase
  • quadrupling
  • declined
  • food and drink
  • slight increase
  • prioritizing
  • necessities
  • transitioned
  • portio
  • non-essential items
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