The graph shows the average Japanese month salary (Yen) from 1953 to 1983, and the prices of black and white televisions and color televisions during the same period.
The chart illustrates the average Japanese
monthy
income (Yen) from 1953 to 1983,and the cost of the two types of television during the same year.
Correct your spelling
monthly
Overall
,it can be seen from the graph that, there was a significant drop in local TV prices in both categories, while
the salaries still show an upward trend. In addition
, coloured
television system was only introduced in the 1960s and already had the highest position among others.
Looking at the details ,we can figure out that, the least quantity of money that has each citizen was in 1953 with 20 yen per month. So, many locals couldn't afford Correct article usage
the coloured
themself
even black and white TV which at that time cost 100. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Subsequently
, over time many things have changed and in 1963 the amount earned and expense of uncolored
TVs were equal.
Change the spelling
uncoloured
Apart from
this
, in 1968 the wage increased to 100 as well as
charge of
Change preposition
for
the
coloured television Correct article usage
apply
that
considerably decreased in that period. Eventually, in 1973 the average income of almost 180 yen took the leading tendency. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Whereas
, watching TV became an unpopular activity among the Japanese population.Submitted by kajratakeev69 on
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