The graph below shows the demand for electricity in England during typical days in autumn and spring. The pie chart shows how electricity is used in an average English home.
The bar chart compares the expected daily
electricity
demand in England during autumn and spring. Meanwhile, the pie chart illustrates the use of electricity
in an average English home.
Overall
, electricity
usage
peaked during the 21st hour
in autumn whilst in spring, electricity
usage
spiked in the 13th and 22nd hour
. Additionally
, the majority of electricity
is used for heating rooms and heating water.
In autumn, electricity
usage
rose from nearly 35000 units
to just under 40000 units
after three hours before dropping down to 30000 after a period of seven hours. After the 9th hour
, electricity
usage
begins to take momentum, increasing to 40000 units
by the 13th hour
before plateauing until there is a sharp rise in the next hour
, reaching its peak. By the 24th hour
, electricity
usage
decreased significantly to about 35000 units
In spring, during the first nine hours, electricity
usage
decreased gradually from just under 20000 units
to nearly 12000 units
before it rose and reached its first peak at 20000 units
. After the 15th hour
, electricity
usage
lowered and remained to
the 21st Change preposition
until
hour
when it rose again and peaked for a second time at 20000 units
before decreasing again.
With regards to the pie chart, over half of electricity
supplied to the average English house was used for heating of rooms and water. 17.5% of the Add an article
the electricity
electricity
is used to power ovens, kettle
and washing Fix the agreement mistake
kettles
machine
whilst 16% powers lighting, TV and radio. The remaining 15% is used to power vacuum cleaners, food mixers and electric tools.Fix the agreement mistake
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