Some people believe that in a city, the best way to travel is by car, while other people argue that bicycles are a better way of travelling in a city.Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some individuals consider motor vehicles more convenient to go around in a city,
however
others trust Add a comma
however,
on
bicycles to make it more suitable to travel in a place Change preposition
apply
surroundings
their residents. My concerns on Correct your spelling
surrounding
this
is
simple Change the verb form
are
that
I believe both ways have their own benefits Correct word choice
apply
that
Correct pronoun usage
which
i
am going to explain in upcoming paragraphs.
Travelling by Change the capitalization
I
cars
makes it easy for mankind to save Fix the agreement mistake
car
their
time and energy.Correct pronoun usage
apply
Like it
consumes less time and power to go anywhere in their hometown because it Change preposition
It
has been covering
thousands of miles within an hour or less than that which Wrong verb form
covers
assist
a person Correct subject-verb agreement
assists
to finish
their tasks Change preposition
in finishing
during
Change preposition
in
few
hours. Correct article usage
a few
Moreover
, it provides humans ample of
security and privacy which leads to an enjoyable moment Change preposition
apply
while
they are on trip
with their loved ones.Add an article
a trip
the trip
For instance
,cars are kind of personal vehicles that have roof
on Add an article
a roof
the roof
Correct pronoun usage
them
it
which Correct pronoun usage
them
makes
them unworried about the bad weather and they can spend precious time with their families without any hesitations.
Correct subject-verb agreement
make
While in
Correct word choice
In
case
of Correct article usage
the case
phsical
rides like Correct your spelling
physical
bicycles
it has its own positive effects Add a comma
bicycles,
in
the lives of human beings.The main advantage is it helps them to maintain their fitness balance. As an example, people Change preposition
on
travels
on bicycles spend more of their body energy on it to make it run Correct pronoun usage
who travels
that
Correct pronoun usage
which
pretend
them more sweating Verb problem
makes
while
they are on these rides which leads to a healthy lifestyles
.Correct the article-noun agreement
lifestyle
Additionally
, it offers them a chance to save their money in both ways like they have been staying healthy do
not need to go Correct word choice
and do
for
Change preposition
to
doctor
or they could save their Correct article usage
the doctor
fuels
consumption that Change the noun form
fuel
Add a missing verb
is compulary
compulary
for motor vehicles.
In conclusion , I would like to say both ideas are beneficial for people to travel around their areas but Correct your spelling
compulsory
it
Correct pronoun usage
apply
their
is a proper Replace the word
there
balanced
between Replace the word
balance
two
trends because they should consider or choose Correct article usage
the two
accord
to Wrong verb form
according
its
needs Correct pronoun usage
their
while
in bad weather they should use cars otherwise
motorcycles are the best options
.Fix the agreement mistake
option
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grammar
Try to avoid small grammatical errors, such as subject-verb agreements and verb tense consistency. For example, 'Travelling by cars makes it easy...' should be 'Traveling by cars makes it easier...'
structure
Make sure to use paragraphs effectively. Each paragraph should contain a clear main idea that relates back to your thesis. For instance, you can emphasize the discussion of the advantages and disadvantages of both means of transport in separate paragraphs.
content
You provide clear and understandable points for both sides of the argument regarding cars and bicycles.
structure
Your essay includes a logical introduction and conclusion, indicating well-structured thought.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.
‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.
Examples:
I really want to study but I’m too tired.
I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.
If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.
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