The bar chart below shows the number of employed persons by job type and sex for Australia last year Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram bar illustrates the number of employees sorted by factors
such
as kind of job and gender, in Australia during the last
year. The quantities are given in percentages.
To begin
with, gender is categorized as male and female, and job types have a variety of seven works from Managers to Labourers. Whilst feminines have the higher quantity in two fields
, masculinities have the majority in five fields
.
Firstly
, women are leading the Professionals and the Clerical job types with values of 700 and almost 1000 respectively. However
, the lowest values correspond to them too. The worst employment of females is located in the Tradespeople and the Production fields
with both values of 100.
Secondly
, males have better numbers in terms of employment in the Tradespeople and Production jobs. The difference indicator fluctuates from 800 to 450 approximately in front of women. In addition
, masculines are leading in the Manager, Semi-professionals and labourers fields
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words fields with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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