Every country in the world has its own road rules, but many drivers don’t obey them. What do you think are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?

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own

streets

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rules

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, numerous

drivers

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follow them. It seems to me that they don'

follow the instructions to arrive faster and

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lot

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other reasons.

Hance

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government

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the government

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should apply more

rules

and penalties to stop and be sure that every driver is

follwing

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following

them and that will solve the issue.

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, l believe that

drivers

don'

follow the instructions to arrive faster is the main reason because

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a lot people go out for their jobs or

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ales let and

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they want to arrive on time.

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Another

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reason is that no one will

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mind for the

rules

if there is no real punishment.

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, some people have their

license

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were

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where

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they don'

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know

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how to drive a car.

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, the government has

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role to solve that problem in many

way

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such

as applying more

rules

and real penalties.

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police man

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stand

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the road and give instructions

for

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the

drivers

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, no one should get their license until the workers

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sure that the person

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how to drive well. In conclusion,

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the reasons for

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that

drivers

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rude

rules

and the solutions for it. The main

reasons

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reason

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is that

drivers

want to arrive faster

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the main solution is that governments

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real punishment. Many people need more information

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topic. It is better to exchange our experience about

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Develop each reason with more specific examples and explanations. Doing so will make your points clearer and more relatable.

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Enhance transitioning between paragraphs to ensure smooth logical flow. Use linking words to connect ideas.

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The essay attempts to address both parts of the task, providing reasons why drivers do not follow road rules and suggesting solutions.

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Effort to provide a structured response with an introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion.

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Awareness of the general issue and an attempt to suggest practical solutions.

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3Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
29Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

243 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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