Government should spend money on railways rather than roads ,to what extent do you agree or disagree.

The government needs to consider

railways

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improvements over the roads as the transportation system is essential for any city .

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statement.

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helps to reduce the number of car accidents as well

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people

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more sufficiently. let's look into the details. On the one hand , spending more on the railway transport system means it will become more

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convenience

for individuals to use which lead to

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the number of

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used.. that means

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of

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majority

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would use the trains

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in

countres

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where the train system is operating perfectly like China , the

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are less. On another hand,offering more financial help to maintain the railways , means that train journeys would become better in a team of

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management and more

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transport because they won`t be late means

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can arrive on

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for their work our other commitments.

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, companies in Italy recorded more work achievement among their employees because they are more comfortable

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over

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train rather than

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so they can get on

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for work . In conclusion ,In my opinion , the authorities should think about increasing the budget for

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maintains

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over the roads , as it can effectively bring the

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accidents down

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it can contribute toward

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management issues during pick Hourse .