A friend of yours is thinking of going camping this summer. He/she has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter; 1.Explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday 2.Describe some possible disadvantages 3.Say whether youd like to go camping with your friend this summer.

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Dear Prabh, I hope you are doing well! I received your letter where you need some recommendations regarding the location for camping for

summer

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the summer

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holidays. I wanted to suggest

you

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to you

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one of the best

location

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locations

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is Banff in

Calagary

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Calgary

, Canada.

This

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site is surrounded

with

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mountains and a beautiful lake passing by, which makes

this

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place a heaven.

Such

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place

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a place

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is a perfect way to enjoy

summers

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summer

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. But, it

involve

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involves

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some

downside

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downsides

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as the place is enriched with nature. It does not have

development

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a development

the development

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for basic human survival in that particular area, which means if you plan to spend

few

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a few

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days there, you need to prepare yourself with every

neccessary

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necessary

amenities

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amenity

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like food shelter water. I really

wants

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want

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to join you

this

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time. I took

few

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a few

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days off just to spend time together camping in nature with

such

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a nice.

View points

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Viewpoints

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. We will start preparing for

this

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awesome trip in

some

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a few

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days. Yours Lovingly Harshit

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coherence cohesion

To improve coherence and cohesion, ensure a logical structure by clearly separating the introduction, body, and conclusion. For example, you could start with a brief introduction, then provide a paragraph each for the advantages, disadvantages, and concluding remarks.

style and accuracy

Pay attention to minor grammatical and spelling errors such as 'Calagary' (should be 'Calgary'), 'neccessary' (should be 'necessary'), and 'I really wants' (should be 'I really want'). These small inaccuracies can be distracting.

suitable writing tone

The tone of the letter is friendly and appropriate for writing to a friend.

complete response

The letter addresses all parts of the task, offering reasons for enjoying camping, possible disadvantages, and a personal decision regarding joining the trip.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
17
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

156 words

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