The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000.
This
line graph illustrates the comparison data about the fast food Linking Words
consumption
of teenagers in
Australia between 1975 and 2000, a period of 25 years. In brief , the Use synonyms
consumption
of Use synonyms
fish
and
Use synonyms
chips
declined over the period, Use synonyms
whereas
the amount of pizza and hamburgers that were eaten
increased.
Turning to the Linking Words
detail
, in 1975, the most popular fast food Fix the agreement mistake
details
with
Australian teenagers was Change preposition
among
fish
and Use synonyms
chips
, being eaten 100 times a Use synonyms
year
. Use synonyms
This
was far higher than Pizza and hamburgers, which were consumed approximately 5 times a Linking Words
year
. Use synonyms
However
, apart from a brief rise again from 1980 to 1985, the Linking Words
consumption
of Use synonyms
fish
and Use synonyms
chips
gradually declined over the Use synonyms
25
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25-year
year
timescale to finish at just under 40. In sharp contrast to Use synonyms
this
, teenagers ate the other two fast foods at much higher levels. Pizza Linking Words
consumption
increased gradually until it overtook the Use synonyms
consumption
of Use synonyms
fish
and Use synonyms
chips
in 1990. It Use synonyms
then
leveled off from 1995 to 2000. The biggest rise was seen in hamburgers as the occasions they were eaten increased sharply throughout the Linking Words
1970’s
and Fix apostrophe usage
1970s
1980’s
, exceeding that of Fix apostrophe usage
1980s
fish
and Use synonyms
chips
in 1985. It finished at the same level that Use synonyms
fish
and Use synonyms
chips
began, with Use synonyms
consumption
at 100 times a Use synonyms
year
.Use synonyms
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption, fish, chips, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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