The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000.
This
line graph illustrates the comparison data about the fast food consumption
of teenagers in
Australia between 1975 and 2000, a period of 25 years. In brief , the consumption
of fish
and
chips
declined over the period, whereas
the amount of pizza and hamburgers that were eaten
increased.
Turning to the detail
, in 1975, the most popular fast food Fix the agreement mistake
details
with
Australian teenagers was Change preposition
among
fish
and chips
, being eaten 100 times a year
. This
was far higher than Pizza and hamburgers, which were consumed approximately 5 times a year
. However
, apart from a brief rise again from 1980 to 1985, the consumption
of fish
and chips
gradually declined over the 25
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25-year
year
timescale to finish at just under 40. In sharp contrast to this
, teenagers ate the other two fast foods at much higher levels. Pizza consumption
increased gradually until it overtook the consumption
of fish
and chips
in 1990. It then
leveled off from 1995 to 2000. The biggest rise was seen in hamburgers as the occasions they were eaten increased sharply throughout the 1970’s
and Fix apostrophe usage
1970s
1980’s
, exceeding that of Fix apostrophe usage
1980s
fish
and chips
in 1985. It finished at the same level that fish
and chips
began, with consumption
at 100 times a year
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption, fish, chips, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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