Wherever
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go to any
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of the world, we are bound by laws and unwritten
rules
we like it or not. Even though
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current society
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very much enjoying many rights and
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compared to our ancestors decades ago,
people
are always tied down by certain
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of regulation
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daily life. In
this
essay I would like to extend my discussion of my view that
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very much do agree that
this
world cannot operate to its best potential
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individuals are allowed to have so much
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freedom that they can do whatever they want.
Apparently, we are living in a big community in urban or suburban areas where
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are getting larger day by day with no stopping to it by any regulatory body. The city
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getting busier and more crowded with
people
and families which in turn contributes to
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pollution and traffic congestion. More
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are booming like
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corner of the city and transactions need to
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and every time spent is valuable.
Therefore
, to enable the community to function well in order to run the country more efficiently, the government are forced to enforce
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and
rules
to its
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so that everyone can live harmoniously and daily business can be run effectively.
Moreover
, if there
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no
rules
on traffic, there will
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confusion on the road making the situation even worse if
this
happens when
people
are going to work in the morning.
Besides
, if regulations are not enforced correctly, crimes
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increase causing disharmony in the lives of the
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which in turn will cause the community to be unsafe to live in. As much as all of us want freedom to do anything, the one
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all of us want to avoid is
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war
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has taken many lives in the past. Bearing
this
in mind
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what
to Malaysia on 13th May must be a reminder that laws are important to avoid
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civil war which in turn disrupted our
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economy.
In conclusion, I totally agree that every country and state must have proper
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and
rules
to
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every aspect of
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life and to boost our economy in turn. But,
however
, the authorities must bear in mind that these
rules
should not enslave any group of society or rob
rights in their society.