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The table compares the production of carbon dioxide in five countries in 2017 and 2018 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The table compares the production of carbon dioxide in five countries in 2017 and 2018 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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tonners
 per person
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of
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China
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china
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China
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increase
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 11% from 2017 to 2018 with 2017
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is
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 5130
million
tonnes
 and 2018
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is
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 5694
million
tonnes
. And here is where have
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the
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 numbers
tonners
 per person
lowestUnited
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United
 States in 2017 had 5682
million
tonnes
 and
2018
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 had 5568
million
.
And
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This
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 is where the largest number
tonners
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of tonners
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personRussian
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person
 with 2017
is
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apply
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1704
millon
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million
tonnes
 and 2018
is
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apply
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1699. And Japan with 2017 is 1196
million
tonners
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tonnes
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 and
2018
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in 2018
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 is 1187. there was no significant change in these two countries from 2017 to 2018.
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Finally
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finally
 is
india
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India
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 with 2017 is 1259
million
 to 2018 is 1359
million
. they increase
8
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% in one
years
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tonners, million, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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