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The table below shows the amount of waste production (in million tonnes) in six different countries over twenty years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the amount of waste production (in million tonnes) in six different countries over twenty years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided table indicates the measure of
waste
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 generation based on
million
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tonnes
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 in six various countries over a
twenty- year
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twenty-year
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period
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. A glance at the graph reveals that
,
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the highest amount of
waste
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 creation was
for
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in
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US
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the US
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.
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,Ireland produced the least level of
waste
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 output over the
period
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. In 1980,the
united states
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United States
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 of America manufactured 131
million
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tonnes
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trash
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of trash
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 and after a ten-year
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period
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period,
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 It increased to 151
million
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tonnes
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waste
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of waste
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 generation.In 2000,the production of
waste
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 reached
to
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192
million
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tonnes
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.(Which was the highest rate of garbage creation over the whole
period
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).
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,the level of
waste
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 generation was 28,32 and 53
million
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tonnes
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 in 1980,1990 and 2000,respectively.
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,the
populations
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population
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 did not produce a lot of trash in Ireland with 0.6 and 5
million
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tonnes
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 in 1980 and 2000,respectively.Surprisingly,In
Korea
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Korea,
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 the rate of
waste
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 creation in 1980 was the same as
Ireland
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in Ireland
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 in 1990 with zero production.
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,Portugal generated 2,3 and 5
million
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tonnes
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garbage
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of garbage
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 in 1980,1990 and 2000,respectively.(Which was the least amount of production over the
period
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).
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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, million, tonnes, period with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend
  • increase
  • decrease
  • fluctuate
  • sharp rise
  • decline
  • stable
  • notable
  • peak
  • dip
  • consistent
  • variation
  • contrast
  • comparison
  • aggregate
  • metric
  • figure
  • volume
  • statistics
  • data points
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