Some people believe that there are various reasons that can motivate a person to keep working for the same company whereas others say that money is the main reason which gives motivation. Do you agree or disagree?#

These days, the types of jobs a person can do

varies

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and companies are finding creative ways to make use of the

man power

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manpower

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available to the best case possible to grow their businesses. Even though

,

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money is important literally in

everyone

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everyone's

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life, there are certain

group

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groups

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of people who are willing to stay in a

company

for a very long

time

other than financial reasons.

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, in

this

essay

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I will

further

discuss

on

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this

statement. The reason why an individual would stay for a long period of

time

could be because of their family commitments.

For example

, if a woman is married and

having

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kids and

also

already bought a house

at

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in

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a particular area might prefer to stay in the same

job

as long as possible because she needs a stable

job

to secure her family life. Not only that, for a woman, distance is very important because she might need to attend to her kids as soon

possible

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as possible

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any

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time

of the day. The nearer the

company

is to her home,

more

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the more

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likely she will stick to that same working place for a very long

time

.

In addition

,

optimistic

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working environment will

further

encourage any person to stay long in that

company

.

This

is because

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society

are

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is

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prioritizing mental health

in

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apply

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these days and the

job

itself is already stressful because they need to meet the target by

end

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the end

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of the month.

Therefore

, when an individual

are

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surrounded by

non toxic

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collegues

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colleagues

and bosses, they can go home and tackle other issues in family and community.

Besides

,

work

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the work

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timing flexibility of the

job

also

makes people willing to settle in that

company

for a very long

time

. In conclusion, it is not wrong to prioritize money to stay in a place but having good mental health and

good

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a good

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working environment is

also

important.